It was a love affair
you and I
It was delight not virtuous
It was visionary
It was a moving nature
It was strange it was pure
but it was, a love affair.
you and I
It was delight not virtuous
It was visionary
It was a moving nature
It was strange it was pure
but it was, a love affair.
It was a love affair
you and I
It was quixotic, it was new
It was imaginative
It was romantic
It was sensual
but it was, a love affair.
It was a love affair
you and I
It was a passion
It was exciting
It was taking-up my life
It was everything
but it was a love affair ?
@ Copyright 2006
Better Half
Very moving, this lady is asking her lover what his feelings are. She is wanting to know if this has been nothing more than a pssing affair of desire for him. Beautifully written, susi for a woman in love who is hopeful in her heart. Interpreted as i feel it. from Better Half
Susie Hemingway
Thank you better half – from ‘My Space’ your interpretation is perfect, and for your very kind comments. all best wishes to you.
April (USA)
April ( from My Space ) says I love “love affair”, you are very talented. Blessings to you and your husband
Susie Hemingway
Thank you April – from My Space – for your kind remarks.
Anonymous
Janey Johnson says ” I am in awe of your talents”
Susie Hemingway
Thanks you Jane – what a compliment!
Jewel (USA)
Good poem that portrays emotions well. Hope learning was involved,enough to draw wisdom from. Jewel USA
Susie Hemingway
Oh yes Jewel, learning was involved. Love Susie x
colin
Well written a poem for all occasions wherever the affair may be, there’s a lot of feelings in your heart and mind and I’m glad you shared some of these feelings
Colin
Susie Hemingway
Thank you dear friend, I so value your comments and your friendship.
With Love.