when hot days seared my mind
and starlit nights were often kind,
when all those handsome boys danced by,
I was looking for you.
When warm breezes brushed my cheeks
and I had studied for weeks and weeks,
when I could swim in warm blue seas
and honeysuckle were full of bees,
I was looking for you.
When I was walking along the shore
and knew that I could give no more,
when underneath my feet the shells
ground, and there my life was turned around,
I was looking for you.
On Autumn days which coloured red,
we laid together, in soft warm bed
when reaching through the sweet dusk light
I held you in my arms so tight.
I was looking for you.
I was looking for you when
crisp white snow did cover the ground
when my cheeks were pink
and yours still brown,
I was looking for you.
I was looking for you,
as I searched along the way
when you used that smile
that changed my life
that way,
I was looking for you………
sara wilson
Scummy, this is wonderful, a great poem from sara
Susie Hemingway
Thank you so much for your great comments.
Anonymous
This poem is so lovley, the adjectives paint the picture and the verbs set the tone. I related to this poem, it made me understand that no matter where you are, if your touched by love, you will see the beauty in everything around you.
Susie Hemingway
Thank you anonymous, your comments are really great.
Sincere Wishes to you.
Svetoslav
There is Good Music in your poems
Svetoslav.
Susie Hemingway
Thank you Sven from ‘MySpace’ kind words indeed.
Anonymous
I am looking too, wonderful John Clarke
Susie Hemingway
Dear John. I sincerely hope you find all you are looking for – remember it is never too late to find real love xxx